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Each piece of plastic that we consume, are likely to flow into the sea. Only the light is on the Pacific Ocean garbage has reached more than about 3000000 square kilometers, the land area of India, if we do not take measures, the ocean will not be able to load, and we will be unable to survive. The United Nations Environment Programme, according to a new report: from discarded fishing nets to plastic bags, cigarette filters, harm the global ocean and coastal marine garbage problem is intensified. The report, for the first time to collect marine litter in 12 major areas and global statistics, in the world ocean day by the United Nations Environment Programme and Marine Conservation Association jointly issued. Marine pollutant is a pollution becomes worse because of signs - it consists of waste and continuous backward management of natural resources caused by. Garbage bags,