2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，不过文中词汇表达贫乏；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Marine waste refers to the persistent marine and coastal environments, artificial or by solid waste processing. Marine litter affects the marine landscape, threatening the safety of navigation, and the impact on the health of marine ecosystems, and thus have a negative effect on marine economy. The marine litter part of the stay on the beach, some floating in the sea or sank. A correct understanding of the sources of marine debris, reducing the number of marine debris from the source, to help reduce the effects of marine debris on marine organisms.