2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Recently, with the development of internet the mobile phones have more and more function. Making mobile phones human increaseing. It give large convenience for people life. At the same time,bring many problems. First, look this picture people are crossing the street looking at cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. It is dengerous. Second, a mount of students play cell phones for long time. It was harm to their heath and eyes. last but not least, people and people are reduce discuss ,every paly the cell phones.They also ingore beautiful landscapes. The mobile phones changes us life. but lead to many problems. In my opinion I think only use it good. It benefit more than harm.