2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Recently, with the development of the internet the mobile phones have more and more function. Making mobile phones human increasing. It give great convenience for people life. At the same time,bring many problems. First, people are crossing the street looking at cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. It is dengerous. Second, a mount of students play cell phones for a long time. It was harm to their heath and eyes. Last but not least, people and people are reduce discuss, everyone paly the cell phones.They are also ignore beautiful landscapes. The mobile phones changes us life. But it lead to many problems. In my opinion I think only use it good. It benefit more than harm.