作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Living in a fast age ,its hard to us for thinking or taking something slowly .We eat fast food ,read fast fiction and even we easily draw our conclusions when we see or hear something at once .Buy this way we can save time to do something else but on the other hand we can easily get the absolutely mistake conclusion . So its important for us to think twice before we make the conclusion .Its obviously stupid to judge someone or something buy our eyes and eras .Everyone has their own life style so we can not easily bilieive people's words .We must and have to know someone or something by ourselves and think twice before we get the conclusion. Its unwise to draw the conclusions easily by the words and picture .As a reasonable person we should think twice and carefully to make the decision .
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