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作者词汇量偏少，也有些单词拼写错误；如果增加些复杂句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
My idea of saving money The 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better. Of course I agree with the most people. Saving money is a good habit. If you have saved much money you could go everywhere where you want to go. Saving money can make you smart and can make you feel excellent. Saving money can make you have a better material life. There is a saying said," Saving money is faster than making money." The 33 percent of students think that using tomorrow's money today is better, but I don't think so. Tomorrow is not sure, nobody knows what is tomorrow like. If we use tomorrow's money in advance, maybe we are in debt today. So, in my opinion, I suggest that we students should save money. If so, we will have a better tomorrow.
