2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

句子错误偏多，建议修改；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但请注意单词拼写的检查；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段。

living in an age which adolescents are lack of necessary guidance and supervision that we will never fail to figure out the teenagers are becoming especially self-consicious .under this circumstance ,teenagers are more likely to believe what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered contrioversial and unreasonable the reasons i insist on the viewpoint that we should never directely and unresponsibly get a conclusion by listening and seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects to begin with it is a unvariable law to existence in this world that nothing will stay still even for just one second . so are the things ,happening around us ,what we see or listen may be just a particular period of the developement of things ,which proves unstable and changeable .in addition ,the perspectives just through seeing or listen are usually one-sided .and draw conclusion rashly are not objective enough to make our statements persuasive. to sum up it is not wise for us to definy any thing what we assume or imagine at first sight only through serious thinking and accurate analyzing can we come up with more rational and reasonable conclusion