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词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；可适当增加从句和长句的使用；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
The 67 percent of students claim that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrow's money today is better. Of course I agree with most of the students. Rescuing money is a good habit. If you have saved considerably money you could go everywhere where you want to go. Liberating money can make you smart and make you feel excellent. Releasing money can make you have a better material life. There is a saying said," Saving money is faster making money." The 33 percent of students suppose that using tomorrow's money today is better, but I don't think so. Tomorrow is not certain, nobody can foreknow what is tomorrow like. If we use tomorrow's money in advance, maybe we are in debt today. So, in my opinion, I suggest that we students should salvage money. If so, we will have a better tomorrow.
