作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;注意文中出现的部分句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Suppose you call Chen Quan, yesterday received a pen Pal David's E-mail, know that he will come to lanzhou learning Chinese. He wanted to know how to learn Chinese well. Please reply in English to give him an E-mail, introduce the experience and method of learning Chinese, your suggestion is put forward, and express your desire to help him learn Chinese well.