2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

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A traffic accident A girl were died in a traffic accident at 10:00A.M. on May 1, 2015. This day, I don't work, so my wife and son were going to Zhongshan Park with me. And we were by bus. I saw a girl play her cell phone and were going through a cross street of supermarket when the traffic light is red. This moment, a rushing car were going through the road, and run down the girl and stopped it. And then, I called the policeman and hospital at once. Ten mimute pass, three policemen and a first aid car arrived on site. Policemen kept order on site and doctor and nurse first aid the girl. And then take her to hospital. One policeman asked me about this traffic accident and I told him that I know the information. Some days pass, it is said doctors couldn't save the girl and then she were died in hospital. So, if we want to go through a road, please pay attention to the left and right. When you confirm that it is safety, you will go through the road.