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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9040
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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There was a heat topic that the difference between the study of college and middle school.There are four different place.First,different subjects between university and middle school,college has more subjects than middle school.Second,it's different way of education,students study a subject by themselves in most time in college,while students learn a subject through teacher in middle school.Third,it's the different target, students study subject in order to earning more knowledge or money in the future,while students only accomplish assignment that teacher played.Last but not least,middle students are forced by parents to learn,while college's student study for themselves. As for as i am concerned,i will share two ways to adapt college's study environment.On the ane hand,you should find a friend who has a target like you,you can study and discuss the expression with him or her.On the other hand,if you have a great foundation,you would study alone.Only this way,i believed that you will adapt in new environment of college's study.

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