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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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Dear KPOHsales Nice to meet you! I'm Hubin. I have knew a new good of your company at exhibition of New york since from 15th to 22th on December. The airtical number of the new production is 5670,I'm very interest in it.Could you please send a price list and instruction to me? Thank you for your cooperation. Looking forward to establish business relationship.
