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information explosion: As the saying goes"a wealth of information creates a poverty of attention." There is no denying that rich information brings us more choice and convenience .However,in the same time,we are distracted by these various kinds of information.In my view,too much information doesn't mean more choice.There is no point in wasting time in irrelevant information.For example,when we prepare to search for some information,most of us may make full use of our information resources.We think the more statistics we get,the better the outcome will be.Instead,we usually are stuck at the sea of information and the result is lacking in key points. Therefore,it's necessary to escape ourselves from the temptation of irrelevant information.First,we'd better make a plan on the time we need for finding information.Once beyond the time ,we should quit searching.second,making a list of the expend of what we need searching will make work more effective.This way will help us get rid of the distract of other unimportant message.Finally,we are bound to learn to tell apart the massive information.
