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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12929
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用学术词汇;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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Electronic communicate can replace face-to-face contact This picture described that the young man communicating with his family in internet . From a personal point of view,electronic communicate can replaced face-to-face contact . First , in nowadays , the internet not only bring convenient to people of world , but also get close contact with the people of world . Secondly , If you need electronic communicate , you only need to click some mouse that can be able to communicate with each other without walking in order to meet someone . Thirdly , when you have an emergency to inform of someone , you must the electronic communicate replace face-to-face communicate , because you have no time to contact with each other . Finally , people will become more and more lazy in the future , so electronic communicate can replace face-to-face communicate. My concluding remark is that electronic communicate can replace face-to-face communicate in the near future .

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