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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12881
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

This picture described that the young man communicating with his family in internet. From a personal point of view, electronic communicate can replace replaced face-to-face contact. Firstly, the internet can bring convenient to people of world and it also can get close relationship with people all over the world. For example, if you need to send a message to a person immediately, you only knock the keyboard that can be sent. Secondly, people can express more something with computer communication,because Some words embarrassed talk a person face to face. Last but not least, people will become more lazy in the future, so they will be more like convenient computer communication. To summaries, the Internet has greatly influenced the ways of communication. So I believe it can replace face-to-face contact.

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