高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown is in Wenzhou, this is a svilupped city. I used to live in a beautiful small town with about 10000 habitants, they were friendly and good-heart. The enviromente there were really wonderful, the river was clear like the mirror and the sky was blue like the sea... The house was small and the street was crowded. But everyone was happy because they had what they want although sometimes some of them lived in poverty. And nowadays, the life there changed a lot. There are lots of houses new built, there are morden and tall. The road is fulled of cars, it's traffic every minutes. What's more, the industria is creasing so quickily that makes the enviormente in a mess, trees are decreasing so this city is polluted completely. I love my hometown, to our joy, people have been doing their best to stop pollution and make the town even more beautiful.