小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend, a beautiful girl with long hair. She is good at singing. She likes cooking and always take it to us to have a taste. She always makes un happy beacuse she is a happy girl and all our classmates like her. She said that she hope her friends would be happy every day.