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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36945
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文中从句过少;作者能较准确地使用丰富的词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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I have a good friend.She is my classmate,her name is Tracy.She is a pretty girl. She studies in Tiandong No.2 Middle school,she is in Class 1,Grade 1.She studies hard all day.And she can speaks Japanese English and Chinese very well.So she often help my English and Japanese.I thank you for her help.And I help her math,too.Because my math is very good.We learn from each other and help each other. Tracy often in a white T-shirt and a black skirt.We are all think shi is a lovely girl.And Tracy likes sports very much.She likes playing basketball,bassball,ping-pongball and badminton very much.So we are often play them. Tracy has a big famili,there are nine people in her family.They are her mother,her father,her brother sister,her uncle,her aunt,her grandparents ang her.She loves her family very much.

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