Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;采用了一些简单的从句。
From the picture,we can see the education pays in different degrees. First,fewer persons improved their degree so that couldn't be employed now. Second,because that,those person which was higher degree was got more earnings.like less than high school diploma just only $451,but the doctoral degree had $1551. Third, we had better try our best to improve our ability and made us adept in the competition world. What do you think?