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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36987
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

作者词汇量积累很好,学术词汇积累要重视;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

My name is Michelle.In my class,there is a girl.She has a round face,a small nose,two big eyes,a small mouth and two big ears.Her eyes look like grapes.Her hair is short and black.She is tall and beautiful.She looks like a middle school student.Do you know who is she?Yes,she is Fanny,one of my good friends. Fanny is a good girl at school.In class,she listens to her teachers carefully.She studies English very well.She often helps us to solve problems.She is very quiet,sometimes she is very active.When class is over,she goes out of the classroom to play games with her classmates.She is very friendly to them.She is a good girl at home,too.After supper,she always helps her mother clean the room.Then she watches TV for a short time if mother permits. She seems to have a special interest in music.Any time she hears the music,she will dance.Though she dances badly,she still loses herself in the music.I think she will be a dancer in the future.But she wants to be a writer. This is my good friend.We feel happy when we are together.What about your good friend?Can you tell me something about your good friend?

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