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Low-carbon Life As is known to all the low-carbon life is more and more popular in our life, and becomes the people's life style. Low carbon life means kind of lifestyle in which people do their best to reduce energy. But why do people initiate low-carbon life? There are several reasons. Firstly, the low-carbon life not only can reduce carbon emission and decrease the loss of the earth's resources, but also protect the environment. Secondly, the human destruction of the earth, so that the greenhouse effect intensified, so we must advocate a lifestyle to safeguard the earth. Finally, at the same time, low-carbon life is advocated to save the economy. In short, this is related to our daily life. There are some suggests about how to live low-carbon life. First of all, we should turn off the lights when we leave. Besides, taking the bus or subway when we go out to lower emissions from automobiles. In addition, we are supposed to use of the water resources properly. Last but not least, we ought to actively participate in social activties of environmental protection. Only in this way can we live a low-carbon life and get a better world.
