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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9787
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Change the unchangeable Hello, everyone.Today, I will discuss about"Change the unchangeable" with you.In the modern world, everything is rapid development. Human has changed the world and make the impossible things possible. As we know, not everything can change, we can't change the past but we can change the future. If you are learning now, your future will be better. For me, My math is very poor in high school, some examination scores are always unsatisfactory.I slowly promise must to learn math well.I insist every day to complete a certain amount of math exercise, sign up the mistake and ask the teacher . In this day, my math has made great progress.In my eyes, as long as we insist on work hard, impossible things will be possible. In a foreign country, we also can find some example like this. Henry Ford produce the famous V-8 motor and he used his own experiments and to convince the engineers. He was the only one when he faced the question insist on and finish the experiment. So Henry Ford was successful because he practiced and applied the principles of success. Many people did not dare to try, to challenge.So many things are impossible to them.In fact, as long as we do harder than now, we can change the unchangeable.

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