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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9026
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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We may have the same question about us,what my life should be like and how can i do in the future. Different people take various considerations about their life, but the most significant is depend on which attitudes you toward. From one's began,I think study can makes one become excellent and have optimistic attitude toward life.When in my colleague life, I didn't care about my future, addicting online and playing games.Study became meaningless and i just make fun with my roommates all the day.As a result,I have lost the goal of my life and the direction to my future.But some of my classmates, at the same time,make full use of their colleague life and work hard for their hobbies.They have obtained a great various of achievements in their undergraduate life, but nothing got by me.From that time,I was confused about what i did in past time.At last,i realized that i must take some changes and rebuilt a goal to my life.

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