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We may have the same question to ourselves,what my life should be like and how can i do in the future. Which attitudes you toward is the most significant thing. From one's began,I think study can makes one become excellent and have optimistic attitude toward life.When in my colleague life, I didn't care about my future, addicting online and playing games.Study became meaningless and i just make fun with my roommates all the day.As a result,I have lost the goal of my life and the direction to my future.But some of my classmates, at the same time,make full use of their university life and work hard for their hobbies.They have obtained a great various of achievements in their undergraduate life, but nothing got by me.From that time,I was confused about what i did in past time.At last,i realized that i must take some changes and rebuilt a target
