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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9562
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
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1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分55.0分
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句式变化多样;作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇,但请加强单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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My views on Online Shopping Nowdays,more and more people are changing the ways of shopping from stores to online ,and people have different oppions towards this problem. In my oppoin,shopping online have both advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand,compared with shopping in the shop and stores,shopping online not only is convient but also can save your money,as we know,the price of goods on the internet is lower than that in the real shops or stores.On the other hand, shopping online do have its disadvantages,for example,when you scain the goods on the internet,you can only see the pictures,you can not touch the thing ,you can't know material of the goods,and sometimes many online shop would put the pictures which is not suitable for the real goods in the net page. Based on these,I think people should not shop online blindly,and learn to protect ourself on the Internet.

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