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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
This is a vivid description of the phenomena that parents have to keep in touch with their children addicted in Internet through electronic communication.As it is, the electronic communication are playing more and more important role in our daily life.However,in my view,it will never take place of the face-to-face communication. Although through some electronic technology, it's convenient for us to get in touch with others.But there are still some message that can't express by electronic, which will limit the content of the information.What's more,the overuse of electronic communication will thin out the affection with families and friends. As human beings, everyone is impossible to be isolated. We still need face-to-face communication.Electronic communication just an assistant way for us to contrast with others.
