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How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent Every parent wants his or her children can have a good future. So they as much as possible to give the best thing to their children. Even arrange their life. I have often heard that an university student do not know how to wash clothes, and don't wash his socks so his parent to buy him many socks that can wear a semester. Some children don't know how to clean rooms and manage personal affairs, because they are deprived of labor whenever at home. Parents can do ,and they want to do everything for their children, because of love. But sometime this kind of love is not good for children to grow up. Children need know how to independent. As parents you should let you children go. Let them do the thing that the want to do. Maybe they will be injured. But their will learn a lot useful things from every difficulty.
