作者能较准确地使用学术词汇,不过存在个别拼写错误;文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
There are an inevitable phenomenon that people always came to a conclusion instantly through what they saw and what they heared.What is unwise is that they just judge and evaluate things because of superficial things.There are several reasons as follows. From my perspective, we are so imaginative that we can make up a story through a episode which always definitely different with the truth.What's more,we don't know the relationship of people involved and we may be bewildered what we heared because words may stand various meanings on various occasion. Last but not least,we are incapable of deducing the underlying reason through a scene or words. Hitherto,we are bound to come to a conclusion by analogy.As the saying goes, people can not be judged by their appearence.
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