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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11361
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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In the picture,we can see many people having a mobile phone in their hands and they are walking on the streets even going across the road. It is so dangerous! And we know people can not leave mobile phone anymore nowadays. Mobile phone has brought great convenience to people's life. We can use it to call, video chat, listen to music, play games, surf the Internet and so on. Mobile phone has so many fuctions, just use it, people can do many things. we can't image how terrible if we have no phone. but just like the condution in the picture, too many people overuse mobile phone, people spend so much time on it. It is a bad condution and will bring bad consequences. Many people use it before sleep and it makes people sleep too late in general ,so next day people will haven't enough energy to work. Many people use it on the road and it is easy to cause the accident.People use it too much time and they will ignore their friends and family.it makes me sad. why people want to chat by mobile but not face to face? and why people would rather than face this cold machine? what should we do is put up our phone and feel the ture life. ,

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