文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
I have a good friend. she is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big black eyes and a red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and chess. she is also nice. she often helps us . our classmates like her very much.