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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40892
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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句子错误偏多,建议修改;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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It's not wise to come a conclusion as soon as seeing or hearing something Many people would take it for granted that believe what they look or listen ,then swiftly form into a basic impression for the thing in their brain That's a conclusion DO we all know? That's a terrify unadvisiable way of thinking ,which may cause numerous unnessary problems For example,without deep thinking ,you may make uncorrect decsions which may infect your all life .You may be in a mass after the false conclusion.What's worse it's very possible to lose some important people in your life ,such as your parents ,your best frends,of course include your close spouse and so on Let alone miking a mistake with someone innocent,that arouse others' dislike Sometimes the things you watching or listening are not always true So we must think twice before do something Without thinking ,people seem to be a walking corpse and running flesh And Thinking is the well of wisdom Why people all say that gold in books naturally ? As far as i'm concered,the wisdom of human being thinking is condnsed in millions of books So we had better read more penetrating tomes and learn how to think terrificly In morden society, hold a pure heart to see the world and you will know clearly what happened Therefore ,never opinionated ,learn to comprehensive and make a clear distinction between right and wrong

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