字数:200满分:100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子,一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人,一个垂头丧气的说“全完了!”,而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿!”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时,不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面,而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之,一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来,我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难,我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样,我们才能取得成功。
文中词汇使用较丰富,学术词汇使用要加强;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
The different Attitude to Frustration The drawing vividly shows that different people have different attitude to the same frustration. Seeing the spilt milk, the pessimist desperately says that it's completely over. However, the optimist happily says that it's not so bad as there still has a little milk in the bottle. The meaningful drawing is worth to learned by our people. Facing the same frustration, the optimists always see the good things, but the pessimists usually see the bad, they feel very frustrated about their losts and groan about them. Some even lose heart when they meet kinds of difficulties and frustrations. However, a man's success or failure is determined by his attitude to frustrations. A man who is optimistic always get success easily, because they own their strong inner power to seek to solutions, where the aim of the drawing lies. As far as I'm concerned, we should learn to the optimists. No matter what frustrations we meet, we should face them actively. only in this way, we can grow up really and get success.