2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦134:Li Lei

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He always help with everbody,he is outgoing,he has many interested hobiy,For example,he likes football、basketball and volleball,it's really so much.And he study very hard,always hlep me with study,him favorite thing is a story book,so i prepare a book for him.We are graduating from school soon,I hope him will be ger up a better grade than now,hope he never forget to me.