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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

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熟练使用了一些长难句;文中能较好的使用一些学术词汇,不过拼写错误比较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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How To Succeed in a Job Interview Scientific data shows that if you want to succeed in a job,.the interview is a major commodities for interview.and ,more revenlantly,you should have good control of the factors. Why the interview become the so siginicant for succeeding in a job interview.there are two reasons i would tell you.on the one hand,you show the best condition for the teachers,on the other hand ,what also shows you have wonderful communiction.There are so many factors to succeed in a job interview,such as behavors,ablilities,perfession knowledes,confidence,appearance,seeking the truth from facts,and at the basis of controling it ,you could mak full use of it. Wish you have a job which fit your soul,now you only need to strench out the arms ,and welcome the sunshine

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