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the young do not know enough to be prudent, and therefore, they attempt the impossible, and achieve it,generation and generatino.but, in my mind,it is not obvious that immidiatly make decision after look and listen.because every decision needs time to consider. if you want to be a wise man, stop and consider it ,then, make decision.this is my suggestion.
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