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作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
In western of China has a amazing place , there is a large amount of oil under the ground . Although the city has many factories of oil , the fresh air will always accompany with you . When you coming into my city that feel a diverse atmosphere distinguish others city . People of karamay has enthusiasm for visitor of over the world . So welcome to coming in my hometown that has beautiful sight and enthusiasm people . What a beautiful city in China . Karamay , a century of western Asia . I love this city , because she is very beautiful and lovely. Everywhere you can see the flowers, grass and trees. When you walk in the street, you can feel the gentle wind touching your face and breathe the fresh air. This is reason of why people of karamay are pride of their hometown .
