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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9037
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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How to Live a Meaningful Life? How to live a meaningful life?People have their own thoughts,but most of these thoughts are about live a comfortable life.But life not all about comfortable ,as a old saying "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."And there is the question ,how to live a meaningful life ?People hold varies opinion ,as far as I think making our dream become true and fighting for it is the best way to live a meaningful life. At one hand ,we should learn to use our own time.Time is limited for us ,specially in our students age.So we should make the time into best use ,we can expand our knowledge or do something we like.And then ,we should have a clear plan .Making every step clearly and never give up if we failed to reach our goal.It's important to insist our plan ,actually only few person can make their dream come true. Living a meaningful life is bets way for a us.But it's difficult to insist on.It's need people never bend their kneel when they face the difficult.

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