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My school is very big and beautiful.There is a big playground and a big garden are behind our teaching buildings. the garden is very beautiful.There are about 2000 students and more than 200 teachers in my school.my teachers are very kind and friendly.they are very kind to us,they often help us with our study.I have many good friend.we often play togeter ,I have a great time in my school.we are happy every day.I like my school very much.