作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
how to live a meaningful life Everyone holds different opinions towards the use of life.However,the great use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.Only by doing meaningful things,can we prolong the length of our life.In my view,one person,who is devoted his life to his favorite things and use it to benefit people,has a significant and meaningful life. Sticking in what we really pursue in the whole life is the greatest use of life.So,to be a great leader or thinker or else is not the only definition of meaningful life.For us common people,it's also meaningful to take pains to achieve our dreams ,or are ready to help others at any time.As an illustration,the labour hero,Shi Chuanxian,who is only a common working ,spent most of time just on doing his job well.Though his work is not in high position, His effort and mind deserve the prize. In a brief,the length of life depends on how we use it.We had better not idle our life away .let's keep finding the true meaning of life through our pace to the dream!