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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17427
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Man and Computer With the development of science, more and more people use computers. And now almost everyone has a computer. Although computers are very convenient, are they really good for growth of people? In my opinion, we shouldn't ignore the positive parts of computers, but we should pay attention to the negative parts of computers, either. Just goes as the popular saying,"The real danger is not that the computer will begin to think like the man, but that the man will think like the computer." I can't agree with it more. People have realized the danger of computers, but they pay more attention to that computer will begin to think like the man. We can find it from the recent movies. What's the worst is that people more and more depend on computers, maybe people will lost their own thoughts and think like computers someday. For example, there are more and more resources on the internet and people easily get information from the internet. Finally, people are used to get answers from computers, so that they lost the ability to think and learn. Therefore, we should be cautious when we use computers. We shouldn't depend much on computers, and we should have a think before we get answers from computers. In a word, we shouldn't think like the computer.

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