2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(55)写作:雾霾天气（haze weather)

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The haze is bad for our healthy .It is dangerous. And it is difficult for our to do something. The one of mian reason is bad environment . We should protect environment so that cut down haze.I think we shuld drive less cars . We can walk or by bike instead of driving cars. We also can plant more trees to protect our environment.Let us do it now！