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With the rapid development of ecomomy,many people have spare moeny to travel around the world.At the same time,this phenomenon caused a new problem that a large number of people leave their name on the interest place.This phenomenon is particularly serious in Great wall.To solve this problem,the mangement founded a fake wall and let tourists pay money for writing their name on it. In my opinion,it can not solve the problem effectively.As my experience for an example,many other interest place have the same way to solve this problem,but I remain seen the writing such as Chibi, many tourists remain writing their name on it.This behavior is very annoyed. In summary,I against management to found a faking wall to solve this problem.Thorugh the example of Chibi,we could see that this solution almost has no effection.Besides,found a faking wall will exhaust many funds, and it could not earn the same money from the tourist. For these reason,it unnecessary for the management to use this way to solve the problem.