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With the rapid development of ecomomy, many people have spare moeny to travel around the world. At the same time,this phenomenon caused a new problem that a large number of people leave their names on the interesting places. This phenomenon is particularly serious in Great wall. To solve this problem,the mangement founded a fake wall and let tourists pay money for writing their name on it. In my opinion, it can not solve the problem effectively. Put my experience for an example, many other interesting places have the same way to solve this problem, but it remains to be seen the writing such as Chibi, many tourists remain writing their name on it. This behavior is very annoying. In summary, I am against the way that management found a fake wall to solve this problem. Thorugh the example of Chibi, we could see that this solution almost has no effect .Besides, founding a fake wall will exhaust many funds, and it could not earn the same money from the tourists. For these reasons, it is unnecessary for the management to use this way to solve the problem.