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My favorite sport I'am a football fans.And my favorite sport is football. One day,on my way home,I picked a football by accident.Then I started playing it with my friends.From then on,I have fallen in love with it deeply.I often practise it with my friends.We all fell very happy because of playing it.By playing football,I really learned much knowedge that never learned from studying.Such as uniting,excuse and so on.And my favorite players is Bakeham.I also want to be a professional football player as him. In my opinion,as long as I practise more,I would achive my dream one day.