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In my hometown, there are many a interesting places. If my foreign friends come to see me, I'd like to take him to the several famous mountains in my hometown. Such as, Mountain Lu and Mountain Tai, form where they can hvae a sight of the tradional calture of my hometown. As far as I am concened, the moutains where has beautiful sceney and on occional there many people selling something special which contains the symbol of our dfferent nations, what's more, lots of temples located in the mountains,which is one of the most atractive places in China. In a word, the moutains not only show the beauty of natual in our country to the foreign friends but also can lead them to experience the tradional culture of our country. Above all, I'll take my foreign friends there, and I believe they must be bound to be satisfied with the arrangement I have made.
