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In my hometown, there are many a interesting places. If my foreign friends come to see me, I'd like to take him to the the known mountains in my hometown. Such as, Mountain Lu and Mountain Tai, form where they can have a sight of the traditional culture of my hometown. As far as I am concerned, the moutains where has beautiful scenery and on occasional there are many people selling something special which contains the symbol of our dfferent nations, what's more, lots of temples located in the mountains,which is one of the most attractive places in China. In a word, the mountains not only show the beauty of natual in our country to the foreign friends but also can lead them to experience the traditional culture of our country. Above all, I'll take my foreign friends there, and I believe they must be bound to be satisfied with the arrangement.
