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Don't Be Afraid to Say"No" We live in the world where there are so many people aroud us.Necessarily,we are not living alone,above all,we can't live alone.We need other's help,at the same time,the other people need us to help them too.Acordingly,some problems arise,we can offer some help to something or do our favor for somebody sometimes,but not everything,everytime or everybody.For example,a stranger asked you to help and would lead you to a place you don't know,in the mean time you are alone and not strong than the stranger.In this kind of condition,you should say"no",because the "yes" may make you in danger.There are a lot of reasons to say"no",like the reasons are not reasonable or not within your ability. Why are there so many person can not say"no" to others?There are two kinds of reasons for those who can not rufuse others' call.Firstly,people are afraid of the others would be unhappy and angry at them.Secondly,some people are too shy or nice to refuse.