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1999年1月英语四级作文真题:别害怕说“不”

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:33浏览次数:1895
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic. Don’t Be Afraid to Say“No”. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1.别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”
  2.为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”
  3.该说“不”时,不说“不”的坏处
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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。

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Don't Be Afraid to Say"No" We live in the world where there are so many people aroud us.Necessarily,we are not living alone,above all,we can't live alone.We need other's help,at the same time,the other people need us to help them too.Acordingly,some problems arise,we can offer some help to something or do our favor for somebody sometimes,but not everything,everytime or everybody.For example,a stranger asked you to help and would lead you to a place you don't know,in the mean time you are alone and not strong than the stranger.In this kind of condition,you should say"no",because the "yes" may make you in danger.There are a lot of reasons to say"no",like the reasons are not reasonable or not within your ability. Why are there so many person can not say"no" to others?There are two kinds of reasons for those who can not rufuse others' call.Firstly,people are afraid of the others would be unhappy and angry at them.Secondly,some people are too shy or nice to refuse.

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