高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

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My favorite sport Football is the biggest hobby for me. A chance to let me fall in love with football; picked up a football on the way home, then play with friends, then deeply fall in love with football;I offen regular students together and training and competition;I most loved football star is Beckham of Britain; the biggest wish is to become a occupation football player.