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In our daily life ,we do it as usually that we believe in our eyes or ear,but the truth may be beyond the facial ,we should use our brain to reason it .so it is unwising to get the ansers instantly when you looking at something or hearing something. today is the mother day,so i take the mother`s love for exemple.did you still remember that days that your mother scolded you ,and even have a hit for you ,and then ,you should get the signal that she hate you?"no",the answer is she love you ,she want you become very better .a litter thing can prove that ,and things like this in our life so many. so,when you believe in you eyes or ears,you should think it twice ,sometimes the things we see or hear may not the truth .
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