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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40867
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分53.0分
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有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;词汇表达较灵活准确,学术词汇使用过少,另外注意文中个别的拼写错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

In our daily life ,we do it as usually that we believe in our eyes or ear,but the truth may be beyond the facial ,we should use our brain to reason it .so it is unwising to get the ansers instantly when you looking at something or hearing something. today is the mother day,so i take the mother`s love for exemple.did you still remember that days that your mother scolded you ,and even have a hit for you ,and then ,you should get the signal that she hate you?"no",the answer is she love you ,she want you become very better .a litter thing can prove that ,and things like this in our life so many. so,when you believe in you eyes or ears,you should think it twice ,sometimes the things we see or hear may not the truth .

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