2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(66)写作:音乐使人快乐

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I love music I love music because it can make me happy and relax, music is a kind of language which everyone in the world can speak and understand. Although people from different country they all fall in love music, we can not imagine the life without music. I prefer light music and pop music, there music can make me into another world. I can see what the singer want to show, i can feel what the singer was think, i can hear the soul in his heart. It make me feel very happy! 《you are beautiful》is my favorite song, it tell me a story about a nice encounter. Melody of the song let me fell both joy and sadness. There are so much encounter in life but who can tell someone is your Mr.Right. One way or another interpersonal encounter is meaningful.